A little late is better than never...
A while back, I promised to share with you the after effects of my tweaking....and here it is. Even though the lighting is different in the pictures, it is still very easy to see what a difference the darker line makes on the finished piece -- not so much in the sky, but definitely through the water and along the bottom edge and up the sides through the land section.
I might be wrong, but I think that AJ credits Marjorie Judson with this little gem.
P.S. I am still working on the whipping post. It's a doozy! ;-)